Peach rescue fail

What happened each time you failed against bowser? The idea was to portrait bowser in a spooky-dark “where did we left off?” pose. Bowser looks goofy, not evil enough, still peach seems pretty scared . I tried to make a fire glow effect with the lineart border behind bowser, I remember seeing that effect on a street fighter (don´t know which one) scenario. Organic feel because of tablet inking –messy- . Still working on my perspective skills. Pencil sketch, tablet inking and colors in photoshop. Still can´t get the perspective right, gotta practice more.